Request Your Editorial Help – Juno Tweetup Anniversary Blog Post

Dear Juno Tweeters:

With August 2012 comes the anniversary of our attendance at the Juno Tweetup. I’ve been working on an article for my blog, thetechnolgyteaser.com, with the title “In Between the Tweets.” While the article is posted I don’t consider it completed by any means.

I’m crowd-sourcing the editorial so the post can be completed prior to the August launch anniversary. I’ve been futzing around with it since April. (Note: Editors and deadlines do have their place in the scheme of things.)

I request your assistance in editing the content for:

1. Factual correctness
2. Length – suggest which tweets might be eliminated
3. Grammar – if you can convince me that a period here or comma there might make a sentence read more clearly I might make the change.
4. Identifying people pictured.
5. Original posters please fill-in any abbreviated tweets.
6. I’m considering adding a sub-headline, what should it be?

What does the title, “In Between the Tweets” mean? I thought it might be fun to fill in what I was thinking about when I tweeted the event live. I call the expanded versions of my tweets WILOs (What I Left Out).

If you have any tweets from the Juno tweetups that you’d like to briefly expound upon, please e-mail them using the article’s format, the tweet followed by the WILO, and I’ll post them if I get more than a dozen or so. I will make every effort to launch the revised post prior to the anniversary which is only a week away.

My thanks to John Yembrick of NASA and Raytheon’s Stephanie Schierholz for their assistance in helping spread my request.

Thanks a lot.

Sincerely,
Donald Schwartz
lghtthruemulsion@cs.com
Twitter: Ishkahbibel

PS. I welcome anyone adding a timeline to this story.
PPS. Get up early or stay up late to watch and tweet the Curiosity landing. I’m sure you have the date marked on your calendar’s.

Donald Schwartz July 23, 2012 Filed in Off-World, Uncategorized No Responses

In Between The Tweets – The JUNO Tweetup Remembered

Filling in the Gaps of My NASA Juno Tweetup


Tweeters Capturing the Moment of Liftoff – Credit: Donald Schwartz

Tweeting at best is like dehydrated food, inedible without water. The missing water is the left out words. I’ve read insightful, revealing tweets and wondered what the tweeter had to do to fit his or her thoughts into 140 characters.

On August 4th and 5th 2011, I along with one-hundred and fifty others who signed up and were selected from the fifteen hundred who applied, tweeted the NASA Juno mission’s launch from Kennedy Center in Florida. Now many months after the event of the satellite launch to Jupiter I’ve gone back to add the water and reconstitute what I left out in composing and condensing my thoughts regarding an indelible event in my life.

If you’ve ever tried tweeting a live event you can appreciate the difficulty of keeping up with what is happening while trying to condense your observations.

Off-World and a Chance to Begin Again

Outer space, space travel and NASA make a lot of people yawn. I take a different view: I just can’t get enough of thinking and talking about what’s out there in all that blackness. I recall Carl Sagan’s Cosmos TV series refrain: “Billions and billions of stars” and see infinite possibilities. I remember Scotty, the chief engineer of the original Star Trek series, telling Captain Kirk “I’m giving you all I can” when he pushed the Enterprise’s warp drive engines to their limits. Unfortunately, our current rocket propulsion of exploding gases is a horse and buggy equivalent to what propelled the Enterprise. But I believe if we can imagine, we can do it.

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Donald Schwartz June 25, 2012 Filed in Off-World No Responses